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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
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Should be Broodmother, and frenzy.

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Should be:
Your ship's equipped gear is worth: (value)

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Should be 'Distinctive flavor'? Distinctiveness flavor doesn't make too much sense.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
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Should be Broodmother, and frenzy.


Maybe they were going for "Boomother". :lol:

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Should be mumbling.

Going to do this a bit differently because I don't feel like taking screenshots of multiple missions:
Mission: Wicked Witches Whatever Works
Start:
"I'll get you my preeeeeeeetties....oh, sorry Simon, I was talking to my pet over there". Wicked Witch of the Wildspace gestures to a vaguely monkey-like alien perched in the corner.

"So, you're interested in something of mine are you? Well you'd better hand it over so I can look at it." Wicked Witch of the Wildspace taps her foot impatiently.
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There shouldn't be a " at the start, there should be a space between .... and oh,.

End:
"Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks it over: "Yes, I designed that alright, you can have it back now".
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There shouldn't be a " at the start.

Mission: Keeping her Pretties Happy
Start:
"So, you want help with what? Upgrading my design?" Wicked Witch of the Wildspace purses her lips. "Well, my pretties are feeling left out of all these celebrations, so I guess I'll have to decorate around here"

Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks around the space station quarters. "Yes, I think we should do some decorating first". Simon, fetch me ten pumpkins, two Big Candy Bags and five Seasoned Pumpkin Seeds to help out!
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The first paragraph doesn't have a period at the end. If the other requirements are capitalized, shouldn't the pumpkins be capitalized too? Also, it doesn't end with a " when it should.

End:
"Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks slightly less Wicked than before. "Thank you Simon, now my pretties are happy!
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Shouldn't start with a ", and it should end with a ".

Mission: Upgrading the Broom
"Simon, I can see how I can upgrade my basic design" she motions to a matter nano-generator and processing unit that looks suspiciously like a cauldron "You'll have to get me a list of items though".
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I think there should be some punctuation in the highlighted area, where the dialogue begins.

Summary:
Wicked Witch of the Wildspace wants 3 Witch's Broomsticks, 3 Quantumum and 100 Jellybeans to build a better broomstick. Also a child's liver, but you're fairly sure that's not serious
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Should end with a period. Also, Jelly Beans, not Jellybeans, would be nice if that was fixed.

End:
"Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks it over: "Came out better than expected - here's your Bimbus 3000". Wicked Witch of the Wildspace pauses "No child's liver.. oh well...maybe next time"
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Shouldn't start with a ", and there should be some punctuation in the highlighted area where dialogue begins, and a period at the end of the paragraph.

Even copy pasting all the mission text, I still think I prefer taking screenshots of the missions over that.

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Mission: Night of the Living Dead ... Rats?!
Repeats 'by the' twice.

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Forgot to highlight it but near the bottom, expirements should be experiments.

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Summary of mission: Restless Spirits
Same as above, should be experiments.

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Should be ethereal.

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End text of mission: Restless Spirits
Should be eventually.

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Mission: Rats!!! Undead Rats!
Should be recently and horde.

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End of Mission: Rats!!! Undead Rats! (the second one, there are two named that, they appear right after another)
Vengence should be vengeance, and unlease should be unleash.

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Summary says Contracosta when it should say Twirl and Twist.

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Second part of summary is missing.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
viewtopic.php?p=746645#p746645 fixed
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viewtopic.php?p=747113#p747113 fixed alll but towing dialog issue, adding item to trade bay and inteligent/superintelligent
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viewtopic.php?p=747558#p747558 fixed some of those starting quotes actually do look correct
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Should be ultimate.

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"a the" should be simply "the".

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a energy -> an energy.

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What's wrong with it?


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Should be pleased.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
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What's wrong with it?



It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
ELITE wrote:
ShawnMcCall wrote:
ELITE wrote:
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What's wrong with it?



It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt.



Google says Seumas is correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seumas


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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
Been a while, here's some stuff I've found since last post:
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Missing a [ on that quote from Loneliness.

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Should say 'Find her and bring her to justice...'.

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Titanium and demented traction modules have this typo in strength, adamantium does not, and I've not verified laconia so it may also have a typo in the laconia module description.

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This is the description from the Herophilus 3000's Quarters base in Staff Quarters. Should be 'Researcher' unless other Lyceum Researchers with the name Herophilus (and a different number) are all researching specifically that? I recall seeing another researcher with that name but a different number, but not from where.

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Should be 'event'.

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Same for the Spirit of the Tiger Blueprint, the 'its' should be 'it's'.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
ShawnMcCall wrote:
ELITE wrote:
ShawnMcCall wrote:
What's wrong with it?
It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt.
Google says Seumas is correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seumas


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Heh.

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Post Re: The SS Speeling error thread
SunDog60 wrote:
ShawnMcCall wrote:
ELITE wrote:
It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt.
Google says Seumas is correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seumas


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Heh.


Google also says Seamus is also correct.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/S%C3%A9amus


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