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Rank: Officer Main: SunDog60 Level: 6541 Joined: Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:15 pm Posts: 613 Location: Canada |
Should be Broodmother, and frenzy. Should be: Your ship's equipped gear is worth: (value) Should be 'Distinctive flavor'? Distinctiveness flavor doesn't make too much sense. _________________ T21 Skills and Dailies Guide - Personal Wiki Contributions - Monthly Wiki Contributions Last edited by SunDog60 on Tue Nov 03, 2015 1:08 pm, edited 2 times in total. |
Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:12 pm |
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Rank: Officer Main: Chrono Warrior Level: 5817 Joined: Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:36 pm Posts: 328 |
SunDog60 wrote: Should be Broodmother, and frenzy. Maybe they were going for "Boomother". - Chrono _________________ anilv wrote: #feelthethrm |
Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:43 pm |
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Should be mumbling. Going to do this a bit differently because I don't feel like taking screenshots of multiple missions: Mission: Wicked Witches Whatever Works Start: "I'll get you my preeeeeeeetties....oh, sorry Simon, I was talking to my pet over there". Wicked Witch of the Wildspace gestures to a vaguely monkey-like alien perched in the corner. "So, you're interested in something of mine are you? Well you'd better hand it over so I can look at it." Wicked Witch of the Wildspace taps her foot impatiently. ---- There shouldn't be a " at the start, there should be a space between .... and oh,. End: "Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks it over: "Yes, I designed that alright, you can have it back now". ---- There shouldn't be a " at the start. Mission: Keeping her Pretties Happy Start: "So, you want help with what? Upgrading my design?" Wicked Witch of the Wildspace purses her lips. "Well, my pretties are feeling left out of all these celebrations, so I guess I'll have to decorate around here" Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks around the space station quarters. "Yes, I think we should do some decorating first". Simon, fetch me ten pumpkins, two Big Candy Bags and five Seasoned Pumpkin Seeds to help out! ---- The first paragraph doesn't have a period at the end. If the other requirements are capitalized, shouldn't the pumpkins be capitalized too? Also, it doesn't end with a " when it should. End: "Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks slightly less Wicked than before. "Thank you Simon, now my pretties are happy! ---- Shouldn't start with a ", and it should end with a ". Mission: Upgrading the Broom "Simon, I can see how I can upgrade my basic design" she motions to a matter nano-generator and processing unit that looks suspiciously like a cauldron "You'll have to get me a list of items though". ---- I think there should be some punctuation in the highlighted area, where the dialogue begins. Summary: Wicked Witch of the Wildspace wants 3 Witch's Broomsticks, 3 Quantumum and 100 Jellybeans to build a better broomstick. Also a child's liver, but you're fairly sure that's not serious ---- Should end with a period. Also, Jelly Beans, not Jellybeans, would be nice if that was fixed. End: "Wicked Witch of the Wildspace looks it over: "Came out better than expected - here's your Bimbus 3000". Wicked Witch of the Wildspace pauses "No child's liver.. oh well...maybe next time" ---- Shouldn't start with a ", and there should be some punctuation in the highlighted area where dialogue begins, and a period at the end of the paragraph. Even copy pasting all the mission text, I still think I prefer taking screenshots of the missions over that. _________________ T21 Skills and Dailies Guide - Personal Wiki Contributions - Monthly Wiki Contributions |
Tue Nov 03, 2015 8:35 pm |
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Mission: Night of the Living Dead ... Rats?! Repeats 'by the' twice. Forgot to highlight it but near the bottom, expirements should be experiments. Summary of mission: Restless Spirits Same as above, should be experiments. Should be ethereal. End text of mission: Restless Spirits Should be eventually. Mission: Rats!!! Undead Rats! Should be recently and horde. End of Mission: Rats!!! Undead Rats! (the second one, there are two named that, they appear right after another) Vengence should be vengeance, and unlease should be unleash. Summary says Contracosta when it should say Twirl and Twist. Second part of summary is missing. _________________ T21 Skills and Dailies Guide - Personal Wiki Contributions - Monthly Wiki Contributions |
Fri Nov 06, 2015 9:04 pm |
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Rank: Peon Main: Theodore Level: 100 Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2015 12:04 pm Posts: 15 |
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Mon Nov 23, 2015 6:41 pm |
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Rank: Councilor Main: Elaeagnus Multiflora Level: 8905 Joined: Sat Dec 15, 2007 3:55 pm Posts: 36 |
Should be ultimate. "a the" should be simply "the". a energy -> an energy. _________________ Constantem decorat honor. |
Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:51 pm |
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Rank: Soldier Main: LemonPrime Level: 8087 Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:14 pm Posts: 5747 |
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Wed Dec 09, 2015 9:49 pm |
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ELITE wrote: . What's wrong with it? |
Fri Dec 11, 2015 11:23 pm |
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Should be pleased. _________________ Constantem decorat honor. |
Sat Dec 12, 2015 4:26 pm |
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Rank: Soldier Main: LemonPrime Level: 8087 Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:14 pm Posts: 5747 |
ShawnMcCall wrote: ELITE wrote: . What's wrong with it? It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt. _________________ Lemon/Meo |
Sat Dec 12, 2015 5:25 pm |
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Main: ShawnMcCall
Level: 2589 Joined: Sat Jan 19, 2013 5:42 am Posts: 1932 |
ELITE wrote: ShawnMcCall wrote: ELITE wrote: . What's wrong with it? It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt. Google says Seumas is correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seumas |
Sat Dec 12, 2015 7:43 pm |
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Rank: Officer Main: SunDog60 Level: 6541 Joined: Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:15 pm Posts: 613 Location: Canada |
Been a while, here's some stuff I've found since last post:
Missing a [ on that quote from Loneliness. Should say 'Find her and bring her to justice...'. Titanium and demented traction modules have this typo in strength, adamantium does not, and I've not verified laconia so it may also have a typo in the laconia module description. This is the description from the Herophilus 3000's Quarters base in Staff Quarters. Should be 'Researcher' unless other Lyceum Researchers with the name Herophilus (and a different number) are all researching specifically that? I recall seeing another researcher with that name but a different number, but not from where. Should be 'event'. Same for the Spirit of the Tiger Blueprint, the 'its' should be 'it's'. _________________ T21 Skills and Dailies Guide - Personal Wiki Contributions - Monthly Wiki Contributions |
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Rank: Councilor Main: Xonok6 Level: 602 Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:31 am Posts: 861 |
Attachment: I never guess.jpg Should be guessed. You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post. |
Tue Jan 05, 2016 7:12 am |
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Rank: Officer Main: SunDog60 Level: 6541 Joined: Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:15 pm Posts: 613 Location: Canada |
ShawnMcCall wrote: ELITE wrote: ShawnMcCall wrote: What's wrong with it? Heh. _________________ T21 Skills and Dailies Guide - Personal Wiki Contributions - Monthly Wiki Contributions |
Sun Jan 10, 2016 12:45 am |
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Main: ShawnMcCall
Level: 2589 Joined: Sat Jan 19, 2013 5:42 am Posts: 1932 |
SunDog60 wrote: ShawnMcCall wrote: ELITE wrote: It was the roaming uber, Seamus Watt. Heh. Google also says Seamus is also correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/S%C3%A9amus |
Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:03 am |
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